02-14-2022, 20:34:55 PM
Alright! Two more in. Asuka first...
Holy shit are ya tryin' ta go down fer treason? The Alliance categorically CANNOT be callin' itself a miserable hellscape. Threats are fine, but implyin' things are miserable always even if ya DO comply, that's where issues start. But yer idea of metal detectors real good. Ah'll definitely add that ta the list of things we can do. Buildin' giant mechs out of scrap iron an' lead seems a bit... excessive. Giant mechs are fun, but real unstable-like in most environments. Square-cube, an' all. More boxy, short minin' mechs are generally what we modify, when we're not jus' bombin' or Ell-Arr-arrin' our ground-based enemies. But Ah'll take the good part of that idea an' use them ta build up our modification industry... though we don't have much of one here, so we'll have ta ship these things out.
An'... Bandu. Let's see... Yer slogan is alright, but the endin' is a lil' bit... uhh... can't really describe it. Like it needs further explanation. We can tweak an' reword it a bit, but Ah think the issue is that Ah'm not entirely sure what a person's "cycles" are, or what it would look like if the world either respected or didn't respect them. It's an interestin' idea though. Eyes on the workers is obviously a good idea, an' we're definitely doin' that, an' disruptin' work with noises is an okay idea. It'll decrease overall productivity, but it'll get more loyal people annoyed at the thieves. Only problem is the system might interpret normal movements as somethin' ta set off an alarm over. Automatic systems do that a lot. Keychains though, that's an interestin' idea. Keychains are a huge symbol of status, what with sayin' ya have all these places yer allowed ta go, an' makin' cheap ones? They'll sell well, Ah think.
Jus' waitin' on CATS an' Monaca Ah think.
Holy shit are ya tryin' ta go down fer treason? The Alliance categorically CANNOT be callin' itself a miserable hellscape. Threats are fine, but implyin' things are miserable always even if ya DO comply, that's where issues start. But yer idea of metal detectors real good. Ah'll definitely add that ta the list of things we can do. Buildin' giant mechs out of scrap iron an' lead seems a bit... excessive. Giant mechs are fun, but real unstable-like in most environments. Square-cube, an' all. More boxy, short minin' mechs are generally what we modify, when we're not jus' bombin' or Ell-Arr-arrin' our ground-based enemies. But Ah'll take the good part of that idea an' use them ta build up our modification industry... though we don't have much of one here, so we'll have ta ship these things out.
An'... Bandu. Let's see... Yer slogan is alright, but the endin' is a lil' bit... uhh... can't really describe it. Like it needs further explanation. We can tweak an' reword it a bit, but Ah think the issue is that Ah'm not entirely sure what a person's "cycles" are, or what it would look like if the world either respected or didn't respect them. It's an interestin' idea though. Eyes on the workers is obviously a good idea, an' we're definitely doin' that, an' disruptin' work with noises is an okay idea. It'll decrease overall productivity, but it'll get more loyal people annoyed at the thieves. Only problem is the system might interpret normal movements as somethin' ta set off an alarm over. Automatic systems do that a lot. Keychains though, that's an interestin' idea. Keychains are a huge symbol of status, what with sayin' ya have all these places yer allowed ta go, an' makin' cheap ones? They'll sell well, Ah think.
Jus' waitin' on CATS an' Monaca Ah think.
I am the They who says it!