02-01-2022, 09:26:36 AM
Alright, let's check yer work Bandu.
First, Ah like the first math problem... though it might need a little work. 48.8 is a weird result... unless ya mean production stopped at the end of the fourth day rather than at the end of the fifth, in which case it works out. We'll go with that. There is the little issue that it implies we can have trouble with allocations, which, kinda unpatriotic, but workers steppin' up an' doin' what's right ta remedy the situation seems good enough. Second one... No idea who this "Tyler Black" is, but he sounds real treasonous runnin' away like that. It's presented too heroically though. Ah do like the loyalty test angle though, where anyone who ever answers he should keep goin' on out is wrong an' will be punished. The main problem is that he's leavin' at all. No one should want to leave. Yer literacy bit is quite good. Tellin' people how to find their meanin' an' better, tellin' them it's with us, that's good. The goal is really ta twin literacy an' propaganda, an' that's a good attempt. Chemistry is good. We do do chemistry. It's all pretty standard stuff, an' elevatin' our scientific achievements is always good. We plagiarize from the best, as is said.
First, Ah like the first math problem... though it might need a little work. 48.8 is a weird result... unless ya mean production stopped at the end of the fourth day rather than at the end of the fifth, in which case it works out. We'll go with that. There is the little issue that it implies we can have trouble with allocations, which, kinda unpatriotic, but workers steppin' up an' doin' what's right ta remedy the situation seems good enough. Second one... No idea who this "Tyler Black" is, but he sounds real treasonous runnin' away like that. It's presented too heroically though. Ah do like the loyalty test angle though, where anyone who ever answers he should keep goin' on out is wrong an' will be punished. The main problem is that he's leavin' at all. No one should want to leave. Yer literacy bit is quite good. Tellin' people how to find their meanin' an' better, tellin' them it's with us, that's good. The goal is really ta twin literacy an' propaganda, an' that's a good attempt. Chemistry is good. We do do chemistry. It's all pretty standard stuff, an' elevatin' our scientific achievements is always good. We plagiarize from the best, as is said.
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