(03-09-2021, 23:44:24 PM)Clancy Wrote:(03-09-2021, 23:42:32 PM)Whistle Wrote: Admittedly, Autumn does almost descend into her own mad state, but she does snap out of it, and it doesn't get anywhere near like him.
That's good - it highlights Autumn's flaws and her inner conflict, but also her own admirable qualities.
A hero doesn't have to be perfect to be likeable or sympathetic.
Just don't want her to get unsympathetic or even unlikeable. I still think it might be interesting if her jealousy is so compounded by Floyd and Syd that she almost murders the hypotenuse in the love triangle... but then I think that would just kind of lose her sympathy, but then again I am kind of writing her as somewhat mentally ill.
You know where you are? You're in the jungle baby.